Serenity Now

by Bokerah Brumley

There is power in social media platforms. Authors spend hours studying the enigma that is “going viral,” working to harness this super potential. When writers have the charisma Candace Payne (the Chewbacca mask mom) used to turn doldrums-relieved into an Internet sensation, the stars are the limit.

Recently, researching possible names for a long-term space travel vehicle, I toyed with the idea of Serenity Station as a nod toward a favorite science fiction show. During NASA research, I discovered an interesting anecdote related to the name Serenity.

In 2009, NASA posted a poll online, giving users the opportunity to vote on the name of node three of the International Space Station. They offered Earthrise, Legacy, Serenity, and Venture as options for the new module. A fifth option allowed voters to give their own recommendations.

And then television and social media took over.

On March 3, 2009, Stephen Colbert asked viewers of The Colbert Report to write in his name as the fifth option and inundate NASA with votes for Colbert. Of the NASA suggestions, Serenity won with 70% of the vote. However, as a write-in, Colbert surpassed Serenity with forty thousand additional votes.

NASA, citing its discretion to select an appropriate name for node three, chose Tranquility as the name instead, in honor of the first lunar landing in the Sea of Tranquility.

But in an effort to appease Stephen Colbert and his fans, NASA made an appearance on The Colbert Report and offered to name a treadmill C.O.L.B.E.R.T. (Combined Operational Load Bearing External Resistance Treadmill). Stephen Colbert agreed and the treadmill was installed in the Tranquility nodule in August 2009.

While I did not ultimately choose to name my own fictional space ship Serenity, this is a fantastic example of how media can sometimes trigger a reaction that launches an author from obscurity to unexpected fame.

About the author:

 

Bokerah Brumley is a speculative fiction writer making stuff up on a trampoline in West Texas. When she’s not playing with the quirky characters in her head, she’s addicted to Twitter pitch events, writing contests, and social media, in general. With three urban fantasy novella releases scheduled for 2016, Bokerah has too much planned for this year, but is happily doing it anyway. She lives on ten acres with five home-educated children, four peacocks, three dogs, two cats, and one husband. In her imaginary spare time, she also serves as the blue-haired Publicity Officer for the Cisco Writers Club.

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3 Tips for Short Story Writing

by Bokerah Brumley

January has been a busy month for short story contests. Mash Stories offers an on-going flash fiction contest. Writer’s Digest offered a short, short fiction contest earlier this month (and , Simon and Schuster held a fan fiction contest, Baen has a near-future science fiction contest, and the Chicago Tribune has a short fiction contest open until January 31, 2016.

This week, I’m participating in the 10th Annual Short Story Challenge offered by NYC Midnight. It’s tremendous practice.

Here are three tips I use for writing better short fiction.

1) Pick one main event. Streamline the story so that everything points to that one event – even after the climax, the story finish still points to that one event. The plot can be as simple as cooking dinner or as complex as sky diving from a space elevator. Don’t stuff in extra details. Often, the beauty of a short story is rich characters, full of depth, but a plot that exists within a small space and lower word counts. Short stories, even though a different experience than writing novels, are great practice in streamlining.

2) Limit characters. Pick one or two. Don’t name anyone else. If the main character is on a crowded bus, blur the extras by providing little-to-no information about them. Include only the details that are necessary to move the plot forward for the main character. Character naming is similar to adopting a stray dog. Once it has a name, it wants to stick around in the readers’ mind.

3) Limit Point of View. In short fiction (whether flash fiction – 1,000 words or less – or a novelette – up to 17,500 words), there is a limited amount of time to hook the reader. Begin close to the inciting incident, but keep it simple. Story creators often want to keep all the viewpoints, include the antagonist’s reasons or mention the main character’s last love interest. Don’t obscure the great words with superfluous ones. Increase tension and interest, limit readers’ knowledge to only what the main character knows. Pick one character that is central to every situation, jump in that head, and stay there.

Just remember: first drafts don’t count. Get the story down. Get the words out. Don’t worry about rules or tips or editing. After that first draft, go back and edit it into shape. And whatever happens, keep writing. Your uniqueness enhances our own.

What are some tips you have for writing better shorts?

I’d love to hear from you: me@bokerah.com. Or find me on Twitter, Facebook, or Instagram.

(All views expressed in this post are that of the author and not necessarily that of The SFR Brigade.)

Author Bio:

Bokerah Brumley is an award-winning writer from West Texas. She is the Publicity Officer for the Club while simultaneously addicted to Twitter pitch contests, writing contests, and social media, in general. She has too much planned for this year, but is doing it anyway. She lives with her husband, five home-educated children, three dogs, and two cats.

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